There's a knock on the door.

Monday, July 12, 2004. 1:14 am

One soul in two bodies. That seems to be a close enough expression for you and me. And not because we enjoy the same things, use the same words, or even think the same way, for that matter. It is because that when it comes down to it, when the skin is peeled back and the bones exposed, you are everything I am. I look into your eyes and I can see for miles on end into my very own soul. But your spirit is clouded over. You only let me in as far as you want anybody else to go. And it isn’t fair. It isn’t fair because I used to do it with so many others. Alright, I won’t lie. I still do it today, but I can’t help but completely let go of everything in the presence of your gaze. I only ever wanted to be a part of your life. It’s your turn to let me in.

Gaelle
October 10, 2004 07:54 PM PDT

I envy your passion
Angelena
July 12, 2004 08:42 PM PDT

I never know what to say when I comment on your work because no words I can think of can do it justice. I hope it will suffice to say this. I love reading you.
Rocker
July 12, 2004 01:20 AM PDT

That was nice. I used to feel that way with my exboyfriend except the roles were reversed and I was the one not letting him get close. The opening line is very pretty though in my opinion. I think you're a very talented writer. I hope you don't mind if I link you.